Tuesday, October 23, 2012
olympus children(the name of the orphanage?)
the story should start off with a brief discrption of the war between the space force and the gods. that is all just a narritive and would be like a "story thus far" that you find in comic books. the first chapter then starts with the four characters. me( meaning citidel) and travis(blazing arrow) are in the first pannle walking down the hall of our highschool, then it shows alex in one pannale and becky in another. the story somehow gets travis to the orphanage(it is alexs job to figure this out pannal by panal) that night is when the character development for nighmare comes in(see previus post) with the "HERO experiment". at the same time this is happening, my character citidel is walking up to his huge house, it shows becky is with her parents, and alexs friend is getting sent to the hospital(with alex by his side). we go to the hospital were the seientists are goint to try to take blazing arrows blood to give it to a new host in the hopes that they can create an army of demigods. while the experiment wont hert blazing arrow, he is fearfull becuse he dosnt know whats going on. to calm him, apollo tells blazing arrow"dont worry, you are my son". this shows appolo accepted him which unleashes blazzing arrows power. the built up power (will be known as the light out) will explode and kill the subject that they were trying give power to.( this part will not be explained in this chapter, but the person who just died is nightmare. his soul which was saturatted with the power emmitted from blazing arrow, jumps to blazing arrows shadow. he uses his power to create a body from the shadows, the power to condece shadows the opposit of blazing arrows power to condence light). the chapter ends with blazing arrow escaping from the orphanage, the burst of power starts my (citidels) power. the character snaps and leaves his house to go distroy the demigod that his space force instincts now sence. becky is getting the car with her parents, and alex could be leaving the hospital.
Tuesday, October 16, 2012
Friday, October 12, 2012
The other side
So this is about a character brought up by one of my cowriters that I have developed into a possible story. So this idea plays off of "blazing arrows story" formally known as Apollo. The thought is that instead of the experiments being porformed on him to give him powers, they are trying to give his powers to another host. They are experimenting with the idea that the Demi gods get their powers from their blood as an inherated trait from the gods. The scientists at the orphanage try to use blazing arrows blood and give it to a new host. Before thus prosedure blazing arrow didn't know he had any powers yet. Once his father (the real Apollo) releaces his power by accepting him as a Demi God( the gods are in on this experiment because they are trying to build an army to combat the spaceforce once again. When this happens, blazing arrow, in a fit of rage, bursts with light energy to escape. This burst of energy was so bright and so strong, the shadow that it cast was imprinted on the suposed new host of the power. Little did blazing arrow know, this gave him the power that they so depsoratly wanted. The boy now had the opposite of blazing arrows power. The ability to condense darkness. This allows him to create complete blackouts while also condensing it into a katana which he carries with him. This causes him to be blazing arrows ultimate opponent. The kick is, because they are connected threw this shared power, while blazing arrows light gets stronger, so dose his nightmares darkness.
Wednesday, October 10, 2012
Sunday, September 23, 2012
The space force
So I haven't officially named this group so I'm just going to refer to them as the space force.
Here is an idea that I had for the origins;<br>
A group of humans escaped earth to get away from grace and its tyrannical gods. They found a planet in space made out of an extremley dense metal that also radeates a power that could rival the gods. In the many years that fallow, the space force quickly gained power and an irrational hatred of the gods festered in the generations of youths that fallowed. They created a group known that is currently being called the space force. This group inrevenge for their ansesters, waged war with the gods of earth. In the end of this 100 year war, the space force rained victorious. As punishment to the gods, a restriction was placed on their powers. However,  this restriction had no effect on the demigods. Fearing an uprising from the youth of the gods, the space force issued a purge of all demigods. <br>
That's what I came up with so far, let me know what you think.</p>