Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Summery of the first 2 chapters.
olympus children(the name of the orphanage?)
the story should start off with a brief discrption of the war between the space force and the gods. that is all just a narritive and would be like a "story thus far" that you find in comic books. the first chapter then starts with the four characters. me( meaning citidel) and travis(blazing arrow) are in the first pannle walking down the hall of our highschool, then it shows alex in one pannale and becky in another. the story somehow gets travis to the orphanage(it is alexs job to figure this out pannal by panal) that night is when the character development for nighmare comes in(see previus post) with the "HERO experiment". at the same time this is happening, my character citidel is walking up to his huge house, it shows becky is with her parents, and alexs friend is getting sent to the hospital(with alex by his side).  we go to the hospital were the seientists are goint to try to take blazing arrows blood to give it to a new host in the hopes that they can create an army of demigods. while the experiment wont hert blazing arrow, he is fearfull becuse he dosnt know whats going on. to calm him, apollo tells blazing arrow"dont worry, you are my son". this shows appolo accepted him which unleashes blazzing arrows power. the built up power (will be known as the light out) will explode and kill the subject that they were trying give power to.( this part will not be explained in this chapter, but the person who just died is nightmare. his soul which was saturatted with the power emmitted from blazing arrow, jumps to blazing arrows shadow. he uses his power to create a body from the shadows, the power to condece shadows the opposit of blazing arrows power to condence light). the chapter ends with blazing arrow escaping from the orphanage, the burst of power starts my (citidels) power. the character snaps and leaves his house to go distroy the demigod that his space force instincts now sence. becky is getting the car with her parents, and alex could be leaving the hospital.

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